Thursday, 26 November 2015

Group: Rough Cut and Feedback



Feedback:

Advantages:

  • black and white filter, creates emotional authenticity
  • pull-focus shots
  • attention to cutting rate
  • opening sequence is very polished
  • fades were effective
  • framing of the boys on bench
  • there is a clear platonic friendship between brothers
Disadvantages:

  • there needs to be a darker sepia wash for the footage of the kids
  • didn't like the shot of Harry pointing
  • doesn't feel like a memory between brothers
  • build up tension a bit more prior to the younger brothers being revealed

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