well done Harry, come good comments here. This needs a bit of adjustment. You allude to more analysis of Dyer but then it is not there, but you mention him later on. Also the navigation of the slides needs attention as you need to zoom into the track, at present it navigates away on all clips
well done Harry, come good comments here. This needs a bit of adjustment. You allude to more analysis of Dyer but then it is not there, but you mention him later on. Also the navigation of the slides needs attention as you need to zoom into the track, at present it navigates away on all clips
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ReplyDeleteBy accurately including the theories we learnt in class, you've created an excellent, informed piece of work Harry
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